Inside the Mind of Isadora

Rendezvous

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Flash Friday Prompt pix 8:22:2016 - photo-20160821095532483

The phone rang.

“Hello,” she whispered softly.

“ Nereida, meet me at our usual spot on the beach.”

~~~~~~

Memories rapidly flooded her mind. She remembered the first time they’d met. He was walking with his metal detector along the shore. She was photographing the hazy afternoon sky. He had glanced her way.

“Do you always photograph people passing by?”, he said.

“No, only the good looking ones,” she replied.

Thus, the beginning of what would turn out to be a whirlwind romance.

He’d found an antique timepiece that day. It would be her wedding gift.

~~~~~~~

“I’ll bring the bordeaux,” he quickly added.

“I can’t wait”.

She hung up the phone and smiled.

“I wonder who that was”.

2016©Isadora De La Vega

 

 

Word Count: 116
Genre: Flash Fiction

 

 

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

47 thoughts on “Rendezvous

  1. That’s very sad Isadora. She finds who she loves than can’t remember who he is on the phone. Unfortunately the beginning of illness I think. Great write!

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  2. Wonderful! I wasn’t anticipating that closure 🙂

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    • Ahhh … Jacqueline
      I know you know that the reader – in a good novel – should never know where it’s going to go.
      I’ve been trying to hone my skills in that area. If I captured you, I feel I’ve improved.
      Your comment leaves me with a big smile. Thanks you ….
      Isadora

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  3. Wonderful story and photo! Romance and mystery, love it!

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  4. Hello Isadora
    I wish you a nice weekend.

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  5. Hehe love the flirtatious dialogue! Great story!!

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  6. I suppose there are many reasons she wouldn’t know who he was.
    Ellespeth

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  7. Ah…..this is so poignant and very touching, Issy. Beautifully written. xx

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  8. That was flash! Really flash in the fiction 🙂 I enjoyed it- 116 words and already having me want more. Oh, please, more? *flutters lashes

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  9. Days gone by and days forgotten. A nice tale of happy memories, Isadora, with just a touch of sadness.

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  10. Great story Isadora… Complex thoughts written in simple words… Loved it…

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  11. I thought you conveyed this beautifully Isadora. Love the last line I have to say.

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  12. Ahh and I was wondering if she’d go to the beach !

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  13. She is Dory and she suffers from short term memory loss… right 😉

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  14. Interesting twist… thank you.

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  15. Intriguing ending. Does she know who it is or not? If not, who was it indeed! Well written.

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  16. LOL! Love this! I am assuming she really does know who it is. Hahaha! Cute story!

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