“Mama, why we leavin’?”
“There’s no water, son. The crops are dead. There’s barely any wood for the coming winter.”
“What about Paw?” I’m gonna miss talkin’ to um.”
“He’ll be with ya, son, in your heart.”
“Will we find another fillin’ station with penny candy and biscuits for Rusty?”
“I suppose we can find one like Ol’ Man Billies.”
“Now, grab Rusty and get in the car.”
“We’re going down Route 66, Rusty. Gonna find a new penny candy store and biscuits.”
“I’m gonna miss sitting under the oak with ya Paw”.
“I’ll come see ya soon. I promise.”
2016©Isadora De La Vega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100 words
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Inside the Mind of Isadora 
November 10, 2016 at 9:03 am
Sounds like they’re leaving the dust bowl. Great voices and a story sounding like reality. Good writing, Isadora. 🙂 — Suzanne
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November 10, 2016 at 7:30 pm
I think ‘The Dust Bowl’ sums it up real well, Suzanne. I’m sure many people can relate to that era. Thank you for stopping by for a visit and commenting. A pleasure to see you again.
Isadora 😎
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November 8, 2016 at 5:39 am
I don’t know where you came up with it, but this one is a gem! Isadora, the voices and pace are wonderful!
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November 8, 2016 at 12:14 pm
It’s the little nymph that’s the keeper of the treasure trove of my mind, Dawn. 😁
Thank you very, very much for your wonderful comment. I am extremely appreciative.
Isadora 😎
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November 8, 2016 at 4:51 am
No wood for firewood. You know it’s bad then. Great voice here, Issy. I hope there are greener pastures ahead.
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November 8, 2016 at 12:08 pm
I was thinking of the cold nights in the dessert. I’m going to be positive and believe there’s a happy ending for them both.
It would be in order since he’s leaving his Paw behind. I’m pleased you enjoyed, Amy. Thank you.
Isadora 😎
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November 6, 2016 at 1:19 pm
Sweet voice in this Isadora.
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November 8, 2016 at 12:03 pm
I’m pleased you heard the sweet voice, Dawn. I wanted to show compassionate interactions.
Thank you,
Isadora 😎
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November 6, 2016 at 12:23 pm
Its sad when dreams are broken, poor Billy and Route 66
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November 6, 2016 at 12:49 pm
Who knows …. sometimes, adversity can make you stronger … perhaps, Bily will gain strength from his move.
Thank you for commenting, Michael. It’s always good to see you here.
Isadora 😎
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November 6, 2016 at 1:02 am
So much gleaned from their dialect… not just their dictation but the relationship. Nicely done.
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November 6, 2016 at 8:14 am
I appreciate your noticing that, Poppy. Thank you fro your nice comment and for visiting.
Isadora 😎
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November 5, 2016 at 2:57 pm
I hope they find happiness – bitter sweet.
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November 5, 2016 at 3:59 pm
I’d like to think that the move could be bring them happiness.
Thank you for visiting and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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November 5, 2016 at 1:51 pm
Of course I can’t resist this. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Padmh1QbhRY
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November 5, 2016 at 3:58 pm
The song was playing in my head while I was trying to write my story. It’s a catchy tune. I loved the images on the video.
Thank for adding it here. Happy weekend …
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 10:59 pm
Masterfully written. Lovely,heartbreaking story.
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November 5, 2016 at 2:31 pm
I’m very pleased you found my story to be lovely. I’d like to think they found happiness in a new town.
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate it very much.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 8:26 pm
I can see you have read your Grapes of wraith, but the parting here is so strong… I wonder if there is a future once the past is gone.
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November 4, 2016 at 8:55 pm
Yes, required reading in English class. LOL
The past is always with us. It’s a history we can’t leave behind.
But, I think there’s hope for a better life in the future if they believe it can happen.
I’m pleased you enjoyed my story, Bjorn. Thank you for your kind comment and visit.
Have nice weekend.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 6:06 pm
Extremely well written, Isadora. You communicated both the sadness and the hope as they move on to a new life.
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November 4, 2016 at 8:51 pm
In the end, we all have to have hope to rise above whatever comes our way.
I’m happy that both ways came across. Thank you for visiting and commenting, Rgayer.
Have a nice weekend.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 5:45 pm
His mama has to harden her heart or they’ll be joining Paw.
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November 4, 2016 at 8:38 pm
I think there’s hope for them in a new location. It can’t get any worse.
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 3:59 pm
Very poignant tale told very sensitively narrated. I Iiked the tinge of optimism
that you garnished it with.
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November 4, 2016 at 8:32 pm
Thank you, Neel, for enjoying my story. Your comments if very kind and encouraging.
I appreciate your visit very much.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 2:08 pm
Great story, Isadora! Very sad that they are having to leave and that his paw died.
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November 4, 2016 at 8:30 pm
I appreciate your kind comments, PJ. Thank you …
Yes, it’s a sad good-bye but perhaps a better life for all.
Let’s give it a happy ending.
Have a nice weekend.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 8:45 pm
I’ll agree with you! Yes, let’s give it a happy ending!
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November 4, 2016 at 8:56 pm
😎
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November 4, 2016 at 9:37 am
Intriguing, and crackling with the sadness of life.
Excellent.
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November 4, 2016 at 12:23 pm
Yes, indeed, CE. Life is riddled with heartache and pain. It’s what we do with it that helps us to rise above it in order to creates the strong person we become. Smiling at your very complimnetary comment. Thank you so much.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 1:32 am
sad situation, but life has to go on.
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November 4, 2016 at 12:33 pm
Perhaps, their new location will bring them a better life. Thanks for the comment.
Isadora 😎
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November 4, 2016 at 12:45 am
Oh, that would be hard, leaving the grave of a loved one. Each time I go to Loveland, Colorado, I visit my grandparents and auntie. You really caught some wonderful feelings in this – both good and bad. Kudos.
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November 4, 2016 at 12:40 pm
Thank you so very much, Alicia, for your wonderfully insightful comment.
As a little boy, I would imagine he wasn’t able to grasp it all. I wanted to show that in the story.
The penny candy became his focus showcasing how quickly kids can adjust despite the loss.
I appreciate your stopping by.
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 9:39 pm
Querida Isadora,
I love the voz in this. 😉 I could hear them speaking and feel the sadness. Bien trabajo.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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November 3, 2016 at 9:40 pm
Oops. i think that should be ‘buen trabajo.’ ¿Verdad?
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November 3, 2016 at 9:43 pm
Si – es un buen trabajo. LOL
We are 2 language geeks. In a good way, like they say in Little Italy down in New York. LOL Thank you for inspiring so many wonderful stories in us. 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 9:45 pm
Yes, there’s an innocent sadness in the little boy because he’s leaving his father who passed on. But, his mother tried to give him hope with the penny candy store.
I’m so happy you could feel them.
Gracias 😍
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 9:07 pm
I love that picture with the vintage signs in the background, you have a nice blog.
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November 3, 2016 at 9:47 pm
The photo isn’t mine. It’s a photo prompt for us to follow and write a short 100 word story.
I, too, love vintage signs. There are less and less of them creating a collector market.
Thank you for visiting my block and commenting. Come back real soon ….
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 6:48 pm
Beautifully written, isadora
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November 3, 2016 at 8:11 pm
Smiling ‘Thank You’s” Neil. It’s always a pleasure to see you here adding your nice comments.
Have a nice weekend …
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 6:07 pm
Wistful and nostalgic quality to the dialogue. Very nice, if sad. Well done.
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November 3, 2016 at 8:17 pm
It looks like we both have a Billy in our stories. My orthopedic doctor is named Billy. Yes, Billy, not William.
I used his name for my story. LOL
I think of the Southwest US as nostalgic. I’m pleased that you felt it in the story. Farming seems to be getting lost.
Big name gasoline stations filled with groceries are popping up. The old time mom & pop stores being displaced.
Route 66 might not look like ti used to years ago. Who knows ..???
Thanks for stopping by and leaving you insightful comment.
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 9:27 pm
Very true, the romance of route 66 is probably in the past too.
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November 3, 2016 at 9:40 pm
When we look back everything seems wonderful. I’m sure the past had its moments. 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 5:53 pm
Sad times indeed. Nicely done.
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November 3, 2016 at 8:26 pm
When everything is drying up, I guess it’s time to move on.
A single mother with a farm can’t be easy. I felt the sadness of the dry land and the rusty old truck.
The photograph had a defeated emptiness.
Thank you for coming by, Sandra, and leaving your comment.
Have a nice weekend.
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 3:12 pm
How sad, and I can’t help wondering about the place in the photo.
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November 3, 2016 at 5:29 pm
I imagine a big drought and people leaving from lack of jobs. Route 66 is a famous route. I think many of the big companies have taken over the route with their franchise gasoline stations. It’s a desolate place, for sure. Thank, Gilly. It’s heartwarming to see you here again.
Have a beautiful weekend filled with special hugs ….
Issy 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 2:57 pm
Awww… sad circumstances for them. Hope they find better elsewhere…
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November 3, 2016 at 5:22 pm
I was struck by the arid landscape in the photo, the baron building and rusty vehicle. It seemed like people there must have had a hard time. I hope they all found greener pastures. 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 5:24 pm
I so do too…
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November 3, 2016 at 5:54 pm
😎
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November 3, 2016 at 2:42 pm
She better visit sooner than later. Happy Thursday!
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November 3, 2016 at 5:30 pm
Thank you for visiting today and leaving your comment. Happy Weekend ..!!!
Isadora 😎
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November 3, 2016 at 5:51 pm
You’re quite welcome. I shall. You enjoy yours as well.
Kyle
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November 3, 2016 at 5:54 pm
😎
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