Humming, ‘Windmills of Your Mind’ ,
Hans Vansbo stood back to view the geometric precision of his latest creation.
Round like a circle in a spiral. Like a wheel within a wheel.
Never ending or beginning on an ever spinning wheel …
“Paragon,” he whispered to himself.
“Clearly Hans, this song from your broken relationship has influenced you more then it should.”
“I don’t have time to examine your implications”, retorted Hans.
“But will it sell?”, chimed his dealer. “You need a buyer”.
“It did sell.”
“The curator for the Sven Gallery called. It’s been purchased to be exhibited in their garden.”
2017©Isadora DeLaVega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
Photo Prompt: ©Jennifer Pendergast
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March 21, 2017 at 5:28 am
Artfully inspired!
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March 22, 2017 at 6:27 pm
Thank you 😎
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March 20, 2017 at 8:02 pm
You pulled that together really well. so did the sculptor, come to think of it.
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March 22, 2017 at 6:28 pm
hehe … yes, it looks like the artists creation was a winner.
Thank you 😎
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March 20, 2017 at 4:53 pm
On of my favourite songs and the original version is best. Great take on the prompt, very creative
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March 20, 2017 at 5:22 pm
I love the original version too. This video had images of circles which drew me to add it to my story.
I’m happy you enjoyed my take, Michael.
Isadora 😎
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March 19, 2017 at 2:42 pm
Love the perspective of the creator, and the thinking is so well expressed.
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March 19, 2017 at 3:28 pm
Art influenced by his lost muse. I’m pleased you enjoyed reading it.
Thank you …
Isadora 😎
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March 18, 2017 at 11:38 pm
Oh, very clever, Issy. I love that song, but have Johnny Mathis singing it on my iPod. 🙂
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March 19, 2017 at 12:57 pm
I’m pleased you liked the song I wove into the story, Sylvia. There are a great many singers of this song. I chose the video based on the images because I wanted circles like the photo prompt. The original version from a Thomas Crown Affair is my favorite.
Issy 😎
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March 18, 2017 at 10:40 pm
i read your story and remember carrie fisher saying, “take your broken heart, make it into art.” well done.
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March 19, 2017 at 1:13 pm
No greater example then Ernest Hemmingway. His deep depression created great writing.
I’m pleased you enjoyed my take on the prompt. Thank you …
Isadora 😎
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March 18, 2017 at 9:40 pm
Querida Isadora,
Pain is often the basis for creativity, isn’t it? I can think of a few artists, poets and authors who would agree. This song will keep going through my head although I prefer the Noel Harrison version from the first Thomas Crown Affair with Steve McQueen. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXFh-mYh2dQ
Bien escrito, mi amiga,
Abrazos,
Rochelle
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March 19, 2017 at 1:11 pm
Querida Rochelle,
I’m with you on the original version. I like that one. I chose the Dusty Springfield one based on the images in the video. There were a great many circles like the photo prompt. I never tire of great music. : )
Yes, artisits live with many emotions. As a former working artist and, now, working with my hubby on his copper artwork I find that emotions influence us greatly in our creativity. It’s the same with writing. The greater the emotions imparted the more the reader is brought in. Your book “Please Say Kaddish For Me” by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Tears … Tears … Tears – Get your copy here:
Ahhh … I digress.
Gracias, mi amiga. Su libro es tan bueno. : – )
Con Carino,
Isadora 😎
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March 19, 2017 at 1:18 pm
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Feel free to leave a review. 😉 I won’t apologize for the tears. They are the greatest compliments. (One down, two to go. ¿Sí?
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March 19, 2017 at 1:20 pm
Si … 😎
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March 18, 2017 at 12:19 am
Art inspired by life, infused with its pleasures and pains, is often attractive to others. Go Hans. Hopefully, successful sell is a glimpse of the relationships to come…
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March 18, 2017 at 3:02 pm
The pain of love lost or love lived is often the muse of an artist. I recently went to an exhibit of the artwork of Frida Kahlo at the Dali Museum here in Florida. I must confess it influenced my thoughts this week. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
Isadora 😎
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March 17, 2017 at 5:07 pm
Great take on the prompt, and I love that song!
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March 17, 2017 at 9:46 pm
I enjoyed the Thomas Crown Affair which is where I first heard the song. I love it too. I’m happy you enjoyed where I took the photo prompt. Thank you, Sandra. Happy Weekend …
Isadora 😎
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March 17, 2017 at 2:33 pm
I love the link from your story to the song… Nice!
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March 17, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Thanks, Dale. I was trying to approach the prompt from a different angle. Glad you liked my leap into new waters. Happy Weekend …
Isadora 😎
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March 17, 2017 at 2:17 pm
Hans has a very creative gift! It looks like there is a 4 leaf clover inside the wheel. Great story, Isadora!
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March 17, 2017 at 9:50 pm
Art can be viewed very differently by everyone. I agree it does look like a clover. Wish I had thought of that for the story. LOL And, today is St. Patrick’s Day so it would have been perfect. Thank you PJ. Have a wonderful weekend and St. Patty’s Day. ☘
Isadora 😎
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March 18, 2017 at 12:52 am
Haha! It would have been perfect! But I loved your story!
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March 18, 2017 at 12:52 am
You have a wonderful weekend too Isadora! Happy St. Patty’s Day!
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March 17, 2017 at 12:36 pm
Great way to take the prompt. Well done.
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March 17, 2017 at 1:17 pm
Thank you, Iain. The image in the photo screamed art installation.
Isadora 😎
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March 17, 2017 at 4:17 am
It never ceases to amaze me what some people will spend money on, in the name of art. Great story Isadora!
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March 17, 2017 at 1:19 pm
Art is always very subjective. The price paid is usually because the buyer loves the art so much they don’t want to miss out on getting it.
I’m pleased you liked the story. Thank you, Jade, for stopping by and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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