Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Changing Marina

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As soon as we approached the marina in St. Thomas, I could see his face turning red.

“Do you see this Laura Lee?”

“Yes, I do Max.”

“Things are changing. I used to love this little marina. Now, it’s always under construction and overcrowded with boats in every little space. It won’t be long before we won’t have a dock for our sailboat. I can recall when we’d be the eye candy for all who loved a good looking sailboat. Now, we can barely navigate around these obstacles.”

“Max, lookout. There’s a cruise ship coming; starboard side.”

Crunch

Man overboard.

2017©Isadora DeLaVega

 

Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
Photo Prompt:©Fatima Fakier Deria

 

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

30 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Changing Marina

  1. This made me laugh, I think the deadpan style of the narrator and the final line made it just so.

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  2. the times… they are a’ changin’

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  3. Oops! That’s one reason for embracing change, I suppose, Isadora! 😀

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  4. Poor guy, poor little boat. I wonder if it’s what you call evolotion

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  5. Oops, I think he needed to pay more attention and moan a little less. Let’s hope he can swim.

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  6. Oh no! I hope it wasn’t a fatal accident! Hopefully, he just got all wet. 😀 Great story, Isadora!

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  7. Oh dear, poor Max. Too much whine I guess. 🙂

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  8. Oh, my, this mad me laugh!!! Thank you, Isadora.

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  9. See what happens when you moan and complain? 😉

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  10. Querida Isadora,

    So much for eye candy. Their Yacht just became a Yicht. Pride goeth before a crunch. Funny, although I doubt that Max is laughing. 😉 .

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  11. Sad and funny at the same time. Very good 🙂

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