The house was eerily quiet. The chilly air, a reminder of her long-term estrangement from her mother.
Sorting through years of her mementos was going to be laboriously stressful. It would be easier once Monique arrived.
She opened a leather box her mother kept on her desk. Letters from France?
Angelique read the last letter:
‘Dearest,
I miss you, though your touch lingers still.
Without you, time is an empty space.
I long to hold you. My heart aches for your return.
Come back soon, Mon amour.
Je t’aime,
Pierre’
Ergo, the secret of our French names finally revealed.
2017©Isadora DeLaVega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
Photo Prompt©Sandra Crook
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May 11, 2017 at 1:52 pm
Awesome written. l love it?
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May 13, 2017 at 1:00 am
Thank you 😊 I appreciate your visit and kind comment. 😎
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May 9, 2017 at 9:03 pm
loved this one and found myself wondering what would be revealed at the end. My assumption was more like “My father’s name was David” 🙂 I like your ending much better!
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May 10, 2017 at 4:04 pm
I may write a longer story with this one. I have so many ideas. I’m happy you enjoyed it so much, Tina, that you gave it another spin. Thank you …
Isadora 😎
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May 9, 2017 at 2:47 pm
A nice tale of revelation
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May 9, 2017 at 3:57 pm
Hi Michael,
I just found your comment in my SPAM box. I’ve been inundated with them as of late.
If you receive something from my site other than a comment it might be SPAM.
Thank you for your insigthful comment.
Isadora 😎
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May 9, 2017 at 7:39 am
Beautifully done.
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May 9, 2017 at 3:58 pm
Thank you, Sandra. So nice of you to say …
Isadora 😎
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May 9, 2017 at 6:58 am
Lovely story, great revelation. Well done
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May 8, 2017 at 2:30 am
Lovely
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May 8, 2017 at 1:47 pm
Thank you 😎
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May 7, 2017 at 6:53 pm
This was lovely. Had a very “Bridges of Madison County” feel to it. The children learning of their mother’s secrets…
I truly enjoyed this!
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May 8, 2017 at 1:57 pm
I’m smiling, Dale. Robert James Waller is one of my favorite authors. Nicholas Sparks is right behind. Thank you for your stellar comment.
I couldn’t hold a candle to them. I wish I had been able to add more about the mothers death. 100 words does leave a lot unsaid sometimes.
BUT … I’m happy you enjoyed it as much as you did. Thanks again …
Isadora 😎
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May 8, 2017 at 2:00 pm
Ahhh. So very glad you are.
I think nothing more was needed. It was just right!
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May 8, 2017 at 3:40 pm
Sweet 😎
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May 7, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Ah, nicely done, Isadora.
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May 8, 2017 at 1:52 pm
I always appreciate your visits and comments, Tom. Thank you …
Isadora 😎
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May 6, 2017 at 11:06 pm
did her mother die already? i’m assuming she did.
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May 8, 2017 at 1:51 pm
Yes, her mother has died. Her twin sister and her will have to sort through the mementos.
I was having a difficult time getting her passing in the story since the letter was important
to add. I should have gone another way. But, too late now. I’m glad you were able to sort it out.
Thnak you …
Isadora 😎
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May 6, 2017 at 6:52 pm
We never really know our parents’ secrets. Perhaps we shouldn’t ever know them.
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May 6, 2017 at 6:59 pm
I think you’re right. The iamge we have of our parents could change in an instant with a secret such as this one.
But, since Angelica was estranged from her mother this letter could have explained many things.
I think I’ll consider writing a longer version of this story. So many questions and ethics, morals, etc.
Thank you for the insightful comment. Tracey. : )
Isadora 😎
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May 6, 2017 at 5:44 pm
What a revelation! I wonder how the character felt at that moment. Loved this story.
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May 6, 2017 at 6:54 pm
I would image she was devastated by it. But, with 100 words I had to end it. Perhaps, I will write a longer version.
Thank you for enjoying my challenge story.
Isadora 😎
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May 7, 2017 at 3:37 am
My pleasure!
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May 6, 2017 at 12:11 pm
Ah, secrets revealed. Lovely story, Isadora.
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May 6, 2017 at 5:49 pm
Secrets thought to have been hidden are now found.
Glad you loved the story, RG.
Isadora 😎
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May 6, 2017 at 9:17 am
Lovely story, Isadora. I wonder how many surprises turn up when attics are cleaned. A great ending twist. People send emails these days so there are no old letters lying around. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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May 6, 2017 at 1:31 am
Pandora’s box?
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May 6, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Indeed, it very well could be pandora’s box.
Thank you for commenting.
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 10:09 pm
I love a short story with a good twist in it and yours is a great one, Izzy! It made me wonder how many hidden secrets loved ones have found when going through what’s been left behind. Hope all is well and happy with you my friend. ❤
Gayle xo
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May 6, 2017 at 7:05 pm
Hi Gayle,
It’s good to see you here. I’ve been writing these 100 word challenges to tighten up my writing. It’s been difficult at times. But, I’m enjoyingg it too.
Perhaps, you’d like to join in. I always enjoyed your stories. : )
Sometimes, secrets such as the one might be best let unknown. Since Angelique was estranged from her mother there may be other secrets that could help solve the issues they had. Sadly, with the mother gone, one can only speculate.
Have a wonderful Mother’s Day … Enjoy your beautiful family.
Izzy 😎
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May 12, 2017 at 3:56 am
Hi Izzy, I participated with Friday Fictioneers for awhile…maybe it would help kick-start my interest again to try those short stores again. I did enjoy it. A nice group of people over there too! And thank you for the compliment for my stories. 🙂
You have a nice Mother’s Day too. Some of us are going to go visit my mother in Orlando to spend the day with her and two of my sisters. It should be fun. Love and hugs…Gayle
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May 5, 2017 at 8:30 pm
And maybe finally she know the name of her father too.
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May 6, 2017 at 2:40 am
There are so many twists to this story.
The daughters names might have been a daily reminder for the mother of her faraway lover. There’s a mysterious edge to this one.
Thank you Bjorn for your dialogue on my story.
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 8:18 pm
Loved the feeling of this story.
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May 6, 2017 at 2:45 am
I was writing to showcase the difficulties of family estates. I’m glad that feeling came across. Thanks for stopping by. 😊
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 4:17 pm
Beautifully done. It sounds like the mother may have led a lonely life…away from her daughter…away from her lover.
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May 5, 2017 at 6:23 pm
Yes, it does seem that the mother was living an isolated life and a double one too.
I’m please, Sascha, that you enjoyed my story. Thank you …
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 4:17 pm
What a sweet story! Too bad that she had been estranged from her mother for so long. Great story!
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May 5, 2017 at 6:21 pm
I think the two daughters will have many, many unanswered questions.
Perhaps, there’s more information in the other letters. Mmmm … thought provoking.
Thank you, PJ. : )
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 12:40 pm
This is a lovely snippet of family matters, and well but together.
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May 5, 2017 at 6:19 pm
The liquifying of an estate can be very interesting and revealing.
Thank you, Michael. : )
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 11:47 am
Querida Isadora,
Revealing and buen escrito. 😉 I think Angelique and Monique will have a lot to talk about and much to sort through.
Shalom y abrazos,
Rochelle
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May 5, 2017 at 6:18 pm
Querida Rochelle,
Gracias por su visita y comentario. : )
The secrets that are revealed sometimes when liquidating an estate can be very unexpected.
Shabat Shalom y Abrazos,
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 10:23 am
A revealing discovery. Nice writing.
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May 5, 2017 at 6:14 pm
Oh, the secrets that are revealed when liquidating an estate.
Thanks for stopping by, Iain, and commenting. : )
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 9:59 am
Very beautifully written.
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May 5, 2017 at 6:11 pm
I’m happy you enjoyed my story. Thank you.
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 8:04 am
Cleverly written, Isadora
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May 5, 2017 at 6:10 pm
Thank you, Neil, I’m pleased you found it clever.
Isadora 😎
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May 5, 2017 at 7:31 am
Mysterious beginnings explained, nicely done.
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May 5, 2017 at 5:58 pm
I’m sure Angelique has a lot more questions. Hopefully, they’ll be answered in one of the other letters.
Thank you for reading my story.
Isadora 😎
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