She held the gun with stiffened arms in front of her.
Coming into the bedroom, he said, “Hey, handle with care honey, it’s loaded.”
“Why?”
“No sense in having a gun for protection that’s unloaded,” he said with a sarcastic tone.
“Is this the one you’re using for your wife?”
“I told you, I’m not taking any chances. I’ve hired a professional for that.”
“I could do it.”
“Really?” “You’re a woman.” “What if you freeze?” “I’d be dumb to hire you or any woman.”
She moistened her lips as she gripped the gun tighter.
“Surprise, honey.” “Your wife did.”
2018©Isadora DeLaVega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
Photo Prompt: Liz Young
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July 16, 2018 at 11:38 am
Imaginative.
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July 17, 2018 at 1:10 pm
Thank you, Lisarey. Thank you for visiting and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 15, 2018 at 3:24 pm
Really imaginative story with a great twist. Brilliantly done.
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July 17, 2018 at 1:14 pm
Thank you so much, Jilly, for taking the time to visit and comment.
I appreciate your good thoughts on my story.
Isadora 😎
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July 15, 2018 at 12:16 pm
Die, sexist pig. Die!
Loved the surprise ending, Isadora.
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July 17, 2018 at 1:17 pm
Dear Russell,
Me thinks this story has raised your dander. Me thinks that is a good thing.
Thank you for finding my story to be one you could express an intense emotion about.
Great compliment for me. Now, you can calm down. I made it all up. LOL
Isadora 😎
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July 17, 2018 at 3:44 pm
Thank you. I feel better now. 🙂
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July 18, 2018 at 8:26 pm
LOLOL ~~~ : -)
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July 14, 2018 at 6:15 pm
The photo’s creepy, but your story is excellent and made me laugh out loud.
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July 17, 2018 at 1:19 pm
I wasn’t going to write anything when I first saw the photo.
Then, murder came to mind. I guess that’s what the photo prompt
is supposed to do – stir us into creating something in 100 words.
Thank you, Gilly. : ) You should join us.
Issy 😎
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July 14, 2018 at 2:13 pm
Well thought out tale. Great twist.
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July 14, 2018 at 4:03 pm
Murder was my first thought when I saw the photo prompt. I’m pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 14, 2018 at 8:30 am
Awesome! Loved it 😀
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July 14, 2018 at 4:02 pm
I’m very pleased that you enjoyed my story, Dahlia. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 10:49 pm
Loved the story, your character was well and truly outsmarted.
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July 13, 2018 at 11:06 pm
HA HA … yes, Michael. It looks like he got exactly what he deserved.
I had fun creating an evil character since it’s contrary to me.
Thank you for stopping by and visiting.
buen giro
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July 13, 2018 at 5:26 pm
Entertaining story and nice twist! I think he got what he deserved. =)
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July 13, 2018 at 10:21 pm
Murdeer was my first thought when I saw the photo prompt.
I’m glad you enjoyed ,y story, Branda. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 3:33 pm
I was kinda hoping she had been hired…
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July 13, 2018 at 10:17 pm
A smart sleuth among us … 😄 Glad you were on baord with her being the one.
Thanks, Dale.
Izzy 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 10:37 pm
😀
I have no pity for devious men…
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July 13, 2018 at 10:38 pm
Amen, mi amiga, Amen
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July 13, 2018 at 10:56 pm
😊
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July 13, 2018 at 2:23 pm
Another jerk bites the dust! LOL! Great story!
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July 13, 2018 at 10:19 pm
LOL … Mu stomach hurts from laughing so much, PJ.
Thanks for the laugh. Now, I have to stop singing the song, ” Another one bites the dust”.
Have a super restful weekend ..
Issy 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 10:48 pm
Hahaha! Yes, I remember that song! LOL! You have a restful and wonderful weekend too!
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July 13, 2018 at 10:56 pm
😍
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July 13, 2018 at 10:57 pm
😜🌞
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July 13, 2018 at 11:21 am
Querida Isadora,
¿Cómos se dice, ‘poetic justice’? He certainly had it coming. Buena twista. 😉 I’m sure after all his endearing comments, the hit-woman took pleasure in pulling the trigger. Bien escrito.
Shalom y abrazos,
Rochelle
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July 13, 2018 at 11:04 pm
Querida Rochelle,
Las palabras son tan simple … ‘Justicia poética’
buena twista es ‘buen giro’
I think she was licking her lips with luscious glee. He’s the ultimate egotistic boar.
I loved creating him. A little evil in me came to life. LOLOL
Estoy muy contenta que le gusto. Gracias, mi amiga.
Abrazos y Carino. Shalom
Isadora 😎
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July 14, 2018 at 1:22 am
Of course you realize that ‘buena twista’ was Spanglish. 😉 Yo sé mejor. 😀
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July 14, 2018 at 1:59 am
LOLOL 😂😂😂 I thought you were testing me.
Rochelle- – 1
Isadora – 0
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July 13, 2018 at 9:12 am
Ah! He deserved it. Loved the end 🙂
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July 13, 2018 at 10:20 pm
Yes, indeed. He’s a bit pompous, isn’t he?
Thank you for commenting and visiting.
Isadora 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 7:57 am
Ah, great twist! Well done.
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July 13, 2018 at 11:54 am
His reward for bad behavior 😃 Thanks Iain.
Isadora 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 3:55 am
Yes.. nice twist. I’d read this before but didn’t see where to do the comments.. Now I’m educated.
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July 13, 2018 at 12:33 pm
Glad you found the comments box and Thank You for leaving one. I appreciate your visiting.
Isadora 😎
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July 13, 2018 at 12:08 am
Oh oh …
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July 13, 2018 at 11:56 am
Surprise 😃 lol
Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 12, 2018 at 11:44 pm
o- you got me – good ending!
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July 13, 2018 at 12:23 pm
I think he had it coming. Bad behavior = bad consequences. Thanks for popping by and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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July 12, 2018 at 9:28 pm
Lovely twist
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July 13, 2018 at 12:01 pm
Thank you,Neil. Glad you enjoyed where I took the photo prompt.
Isadora 😎
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July 12, 2018 at 8:31 pm
He got his comeuppance!!
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July 13, 2018 at 12:00 pm
He got what he deserved especially with his attitude.
Thanks 😊 glad you liked it and commented.
Isadora 😎
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July 12, 2018 at 7:36 pm
Oh! Bingo! Surprise indeed. Well done!
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July 13, 2018 at 11:58 am
😂😂😂 bad behavior gets you nowhere.
Thanks,Alicia. Murder came to mind when I saw the photo.
Isadora 😎
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