You left.
Your books left behind as a reminder of your passion; reading.
And, I spent time building something that could not be built.
You showed me I’d counted on the illusion of my heart.
Yes, perhaps, it’s time to say goodbye my love.
These words you dared not want to hear.
For our lives together can’t be built on crumbly silt of sand.
For it would fall upon itself because we tried and failed, persisting in the dream, because I believed it would succeed.
It’s hard to distinguish whether the world we live in is a reality or delusion.
2019©Isadora DeLaVega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
Photo Prompt:©CEAyr
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September 17, 2019 at 7:01 pm
The sadness here is so strong—but there is also a hint of hope. Beautiful writing.
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September 18, 2019 at 1:44 pm
One must always leave a bit of hope in relationships especially when one doesn’t want to say good-bye. I’m pleased you enjoyed this story, Linda, and left your lovely comment. Thank you, Isadora 😎
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September 17, 2019 at 1:11 pm
Lovely writing, Isadora. She’s learned to face reality. 🙂 — Suzanne
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September 18, 2019 at 1:42 pm
Sometimes, it’s difficult to see what’s right before your eyes. Glad you enjoyed my story, Suzanne, thnak you.
Isadora 😎
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September 16, 2019 at 9:19 pm
I like how you mixed emotion with poetry. Nice done
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September 16, 2019 at 10:13 pm
Thank you, Michael. I appreciate your visit and comment. I was trying to change my writing up a little with a bit of poetry.
Isadora 😎
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September 16, 2019 at 4:07 pm
Poetic.
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September 16, 2019 at 5:44 pm
Yes, Dawn, I was trying to stretch my writing in a different way with FF. Thank you for enjoying … Isadora 😎
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September 16, 2019 at 10:44 am
Ah yes, those type of relationships. We hang on even though we know we are building something that cannot be built. Nicely put.
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September 16, 2019 at 9:55 pm
I see this with many of my friends and some family members too. It’s difficult to have a relationship without trust and sharing of emotions. Thank you, Fatima, for your lovely comment and for visiting.
Isadora 😎
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September 16, 2019 at 5:04 am
Great display of the workings of the mind. Something poetic about the words. Well done!
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September 16, 2019 at 9:59 pm
Thank you for visiting and commenting. I was experimenting with poetry and the prompt this time on FF. I’m very pleased your comment is such high praise.
Isadora 😎
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September 15, 2019 at 11:44 am
Querida Isadora,
So much longing in this piece. People don’t always live up to expectations and things do change. Hermosas palabras. Muy triste.
Shalom y abrazos,
Rochelle
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September 16, 2019 at 10:03 pm
Querida Rochelle,
Yes indeed relationships come with many expectations sometimes. When those hopes and thoughts aren’t met it can put huge strains on couples.
I was trying to write in a different style this time for the FF prompt. I’m pleased you liked this. Gracias, mi amiga.
Isadora 😎
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September 15, 2019 at 6:35 am
It seems you two are different people. It is wise to break up and stay as friends.
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September 16, 2019 at 10:07 pm
Relationships can be difficult expecially if the two involved are on different planes. Thank you, Abhijit, for your insightful comment.
Isadora 😎
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September 14, 2019 at 8:55 pm
Lovely words.
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September 14, 2019 at 9:13 am
A poignant piece indeed.
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September 14, 2019 at 5:09 pm
So very pleased you thought so, Keith.
Thank you, Isadpra 😎
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September 14, 2019 at 5:19 am
Great. The longing in words is so heart touching.
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September 13, 2019 at 9:31 pm
Deliciously thought provoking, Isadora.
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September 13, 2019 at 7:52 pm
A genuine expression from the heart, mind, and soul. I also like the single line approach. Well done, Isadora …. BTW – Elvis is in the building to take the stage for a weekend concert.
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September 16, 2019 at 10:27 pm
I’m happy you enjoyed my change in writing style. I was experimenting with poetry for the writing prompt this week. Thank you, aFrank. I enjoyed the Elvis concert.
Isadora 😎
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September 13, 2019 at 7:18 pm
Perhaps love is a delusion, or at least a gloss on something more basic. Perhaps that doesn’t matter so long as it commands our belief
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September 16, 2019 at 10:29 pm
Truer words could not be said. I agree. Some couples have expectations for each other that can’t be met. Lest we forget we are individuals even in a committed relationship. Thank you, Neil, for your insightful comment and for visiting. Have a wonderful week.
Isadora 😎
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September 13, 2019 at 4:12 pm
Beautifully expressed Isadora. The pain and longing is evident.
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September 13, 2019 at 5:54 pm
Thank you, Drew. Yes, unspoken words can say so much. It can be isolating when one is left alone and lonely. Too many relationships forget there is a responsibility in caring about the other person feelings and needs. Aahhhh … so grateful I’ve never known such loneliness.
I always appreciate your commenets and visits. Have a superb weekend … Isadora 😎
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