Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Chocolate Eyes


She needed band for extra school credits. 

Pointing, Mr. Cohen said, “Pick out a clarinet. I’ll get a new mouthpiece.”

Her friend Dominique teased her about the cute boy near the instruments. 

“Stop! He’s probably dating.” 

“Nope, I heard he’s not. Besides, he’s looking at you.” 

“From who? Is he?” 

“I have my sources.”

“Well, I’m not interested.”

“I have my clarinet; see you inside.” 

As Dominique passed the boy, she winked and gave him the okay sign.

“Need some help,” he said approaching her.

No, I do not,” curtly, while dying inside.

‘Oh, those luscious chocolate eyes are yummy.’

2021©Isadora DeLaVega

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Genre: Flash Fiction

Word Count: 100 words

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

19 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Chocolate Eyes

  1. There’s nothing quite like a. high school romance 🙂

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  2. Oh the games people play! Fun one.

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  3. it’s wonderful. a rom-com flick in the making. 🙂

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  4. Querida Isadora,

    Perhaps they can both get past their shyness and create beautiful music together. Bien escrito y dulce.

    Shalom y abrazos,


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  5. An interesting interlude… leaves me wanting more. I want to see this girl turn into a genius clarinet player who marries the maestro boy. Well done. 🙂

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  6. Well, we all need a bit of high school romance 😉

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  7. I wonder if she will live to regret that curt rejoinder. Some boys just don’t come back a second time.

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