Anthony, Dad wants you to pile the wood he chopped last Saturday.
I watched him as he went to the barn for the wheel-barrow. The doctors said to keep him active, and his hyper-active behavior will calm down. Many kids with ADHD become productive adults.
It had snowed the night before. Pushing the wheel-barrow was tough.
He was done and stood proud as he viewed his work.
Momma, come on out to see the woodpile.
Bewildered, she hid her emotions.
Anthony, my sweet boy, you’ve added the woodpile to the front of the house instead of the back.
2021©Isadora De La Vega
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Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100
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November 22, 2021 at 3:20 pm
Oh, but he did it and it’s not his fault. Next time she’ll have learned to be more precise. Why don’t they re-stack all together? Lovely take Isadora.
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November 23, 2021 at 12:22 am
There are some who need more details …
like husbands. lol
Restacking could create a yearly tradition of: Let’s Pile Wood Day. Thank you for visiting and leaving a wonderful comment. Have a good week … Isadora 😎
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November 22, 2021 at 6:42 am
Simple mistake, but at least his restocking will keep him busy! Poor guy. Nice snapshot of life!
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November 23, 2021 at 12:23 am
Thank you, Brenda. Yes, I guess it is a snippett of life. Super thoughts on my story.
Have a good week … Isadora 😎
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November 21, 2021 at 10:44 am
Hmm. what to do now? 🙂
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November 23, 2021 at 2:10 pm
Yes, indeed. What do you do when he is standing there so proud. Mom’s, we figure it out. Thank you, Sandra, for visiting and commenting on my story.
Have a good week … Isadora 😎
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November 20, 2021 at 7:06 pm
ouch! he’ll have to do it all over again. 🙂
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November 20, 2021 at 7:15 pm
Or they’ll have to use the wood real quick…
Thank you, Isadora 😎
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November 20, 2021 at 6:29 pm
Lesson learned: You have to give specific, complete direction in simple terms. “Stack the firewood. Put it at the back of the house between the basement window and the cellar door.” And, because I’ve worked with ADD, including my husband’s, I know I’m probably not specific enough 🙂
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November 20, 2021 at 7:13 pm
Yes, it seems most children need details. Such an odd study of hyperactivity that, at one time, would have been categorized as over-active. At times, I wonder if my hubby may be HDHD as he is always on the go and easily distracted even at age 75. Thanks for visiting, Linda.
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November 22, 2021 at 2:33 am
There’s no question about my husband’s
ADD. He even jokes about it himself 🙂
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November 23, 2021 at 2:16 pm
Hubby had an aunt that developed alzheimer. She went from being a very
formal serious person to a comedic elder. 😀 She was s lot more fun.
Some things require humor.
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November 20, 2021 at 5:26 pm
Looks like we went down the same path!
Most people with ADHD are very intelligent and go far… look at Einstein and Churchill 😉
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November 23, 2021 at 3:31 pm
Well. look at me, I’m still catching up on comment replies and it’s almost new prompt time. lol
Thank you for sayong we’re down the same writing path. Great minds think alike.
I have a grandson that has ADHD. I think about my daughters difficulties in keeping
the lines of kindness when you feel frustrated. He’s such a cutie too. Nanny opinions
coming through. lol
Have a super week … Isadora
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November 23, 2021 at 3:35 pm
Hey… life is to be lived outside of WordPress, I say. Yes, GMTA.
My son has ADD, less hyper, though he has his moments – rather rarely now that he is a young adult. They put him on meds when he was younger but he stopped them rather quickly when he saw it cut his appetite – he loves food… He has figured out various way to keep himself organised.
Have a fabulous week!
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November 19, 2021 at 5:57 pm
Nice one, Isadora and I liked how the mother had lovingly and gently told him that he had put the woodpile in the wrong place.
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November 19, 2021 at 6:29 pm
A gentle reminder can go so much further than a hostile angry response. I worked with Down Syndrome kids for a bit. Patience and a gentle voice always worked. Thank you for reading and leaving your very lovely comment. Have a safe and restful weekend … Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 3:54 pm
Aw, bless! Now he can have fun moving it all around to the back 🙂
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November 19, 2021 at 5:43 pm
lol I suppose mom will wait to see how dad feels when he gets home from work. However, no door for him to enter the house might be something to address first. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 1:40 pm
An amusing yet poignant piece. Well done, Isadora.
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November 19, 2021 at 5:45 pm
Thank you, Keith. I’m glad you found it to be. Lovely thoughts on my story … Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 12:27 pm
Querida Isadora,
This story touched my heart. My youngest son challenged us with his ADHD. At the same time he is extremely gifted as a musician and had the most amazing imagination as a child. One year for Christmas I gave him a box of assorted hats., mostly from thrift stores. (I think he was 5). He still remembers that as his best present ever. Today he’s a responsible productive adult and attentive husband.
So I wonder if Mom will make Anthony move it all around back or simply show off his handiwork. 😉
Bien escrito, mi amiga.
Shalom y abrazos,
Rochelle
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November 19, 2021 at 6:14 pm
Querida Rochelle,
I’m sure she’ll be gentle with him. After all, he may have misinterpreted her instructions.
I can identify with ADHD through my grandson. He was diagnosed and medicated. My daughter didn’t like the side effects the meds caused. She took him off and started a wholistic way of raising him. He needs activity. She has him in 3 which seem to help tremendously. He will manage as an adult because, so far, he’s getting very good grades. COVID was a great help. He could walk around when he was fidgety. Now, in middle school there are class changes. It’s manageable. BRAVO for your son. Gracias for sun buenos palabras, mi amiga.
Abrazos y Carino,
Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 10:41 am
So much for specific instructions. Well done.
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November 19, 2021 at 6:36 pm
His mom may not have been very clear on where she wanted the wood to go.
I admire her patience and gentle way of telling him. Thanks, Bill.
I appreciate your visiting and commenting. Have aa safe weekend …
Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 7:17 pm
You’re welcome. Take care, Isadora.
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November 20, 2021 at 4:51 pm
😊😎
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November 19, 2021 at 8:53 am
And a very decorative addition it is too.
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November 19, 2021 at 5:48 pm
It does have an artsy look. It’s a bit intrusive though … and … the door is gone so something has to be changed. I think a new entrance might be easier. LOL Thanks, Neil.
Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 6:35 am
It’s a delightful, hopeful little story. 🙂
Free language lesson: The tool used is a wheelbarrow.
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November 19, 2021 at 5:51 pm
Oh … Thanks for the free lesson. Archon. I always appreciate good critiques. This is a perfect one … and free … I can’t beat that price. Can you tell I’m from the city? No wheelbarrows where I lived. LOL I will have to go back and ‘THANK” Grammarly for not doing it’s job. Thanks again … Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 8:50 pm
Odd! Word program’s Spellchecker gets its little ones and zeros in a knot over it. 😯
This is an example of ‘technological obsolescence.’ We have forgotten about the fishmonger’s, and the greengrocer’s wheeled barrow. 🙂
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November 19, 2021 at 6:15 am
Funny, Isadora… after all that work!
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November 19, 2021 at 5:54 pm
He’s young. I’m sure it will build his muscles.
I’m sure mom and dad will decide if they like using the back door now that the front door no longer exists. 😄 Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 6:50 pm
I’m usually quite observant, but didn’t even notice the missing door! 🤣
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November 20, 2021 at 4:53 pm
I wasn’t sure if there was supposed to be a door. I figured, for the stories sake, I’d include a missing front door. Your observations are fine. I just took a leap. Enjoy your weekend, Tom.
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November 20, 2021 at 4:58 pm
No, no… there has to be a door. There’s always a door! Hehehe! You enjoy your weekend too! Thanks, Isadora 🙂
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November 20, 2021 at 5:07 pm
😂
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November 19, 2021 at 1:48 am
Bought a smile to my face Isadora 🙂
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November 19, 2021 at 6:38 pm
I was hoping to write a positive tale.
He did do his best. Things can always be change.
The weather – if snowy cold – will fix the firewood issue real quick.
Thanks … Isadora 😎
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November 19, 2021 at 7:34 pm
A cold winter will get the wood inside quick smart indeed 🙂
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