Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioners – Fed Up

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Friday Fictioneers – Fed Up

Determined, Josephine woke at 5 a.m.

Saturday would mark her freedom day.

She felt battered.

No one could or had helped her.

They all said, “Be Patient”.

Right!

She grabbed her backpack, some rolls and water.

Woof looked at her with weepy eyes.

He’d been her constant friend and companion since birth.

As a baby, the word Wolf was hard to say. So,Woof it was.


 Josephine got out of the house, without notice.

She always felt invisible.

Except at school, where the bullying felt unbearable.

Finally, she reached the tracks.

Without turning, she knew.

Woof was behind her.

2015©isadoradelavega

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***** Bullying is the use of force, threat, or coercion to abuse,

intimidate, or aggressively others.

The behavior is often repeated and habitual.

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Friday Fictioneers

The challenge is to write a story

 beginning, middle and end in 100 words.

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

37 thoughts on “Friday Fictioners – Fed Up

  1. What a nice start to this great adventure of writing.. Bullying is terrible, and sad she had to leave, wonderful background to the name of the dog

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    • Oh, I am very honored to have you visit and leave your incredible comment. Thank you for the encouragement and welcome. I appreciate your pointing out a part of the writing that was good. I am open to learning how to build a better craft of writing.

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  2. Beautiful and love your new header!

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  3. Time to get away. Hope the world isn’t too hard on the pair of them.

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    • I suppose I could write a little story about them and seee if they make it. There are a great many possibilities in fiction.
      A gal and her faithful companion trying to make it in a harsh world. : )
      Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. It’s greatly appreciated. : )

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  4. Loved it! Can’t believe you can pack a whole story with emotion into only 100 words! great job. Maybe one day I will join in!

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    • Oh yes, please do, join in. It’s a great challenge for the mind but extremely satisfying once finished. 😊
      I’m very happy you enjoyed my story. I tend to be an emotional writer. This image brought a great deal of emotion to mind. Thanks for popping in and leaving such a stellar comment. 😀

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  5. AnElephantCant give a big enough welcome
    To his delightful new friend Isadora
    She does not fail
    With this excellent but heart-rending tale
    He is sure he is going to adore her

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    • Thank you very much for the welcome AnElephantCant. It’s greatly appreciated. Your very kind words have
      brought a huge smile to my face. I am in the company of many prestigious writers who will teach me a lot.
      I am honored to have been welcomed. : )

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  6. Really wll written as always, Issy. I think Woof will make sure she comes to no harm. 🙂

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  7. Well told. I feel her pain, and I’m glad she has Woof.

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  8. Dear Isadora,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Kids can be so cruel…to say that is almost cliche but I remember going through some of that as a kid. You don’t just outgrow the pain. Well done. I hope to read more from you.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Thank you for your very kind welcome, Rochelle. Yes, kids can be a thorn that is
      difficult to remove. Hopefully, time heals all wounds. I will try my best to keep
      up with this prestigious group of writers. I am in awe to stand in their shadows.
      Gracias
      Isadora

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  9. Welcome, Izzy. I’m thrilled you made it. I could feel your narrator’s pain. Well done and I look forward to more from you.

    janet

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    • If you felt the narrator pain then I am pleased. I was trying to get the heartache of bullying across to the reader.
      Thank you for directing me to the challenge. I hope there are more inspiring photos for me. 😊
      If it’s easy to explain could you let me know how to put the iLinky bar in my post. Thanks … 😀

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      • Izzy, go to Rochelle’s post. Right by the blue add-link thing is a line saying “get the InLinkz code.” Click on that. You then have to sign in to InLInkz or create an account. Once you’re in, choose which sort of blog you have. Copy that information and go to your post and go to “text” or whatever the tab is at the top of the post that isn’t “visual.” Paste the InLinkz info at the bottom of your post. That should bring up the blue froggy guy when you’re back on visual. Save and publish.

        I hope that’s clear. It used to be easier because you didn’t have to sign in, but once you get it, you’ll be fine. Let me know if you have a question or it doesn’t work.

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  10. I like your take on the picture. It really has a lot of possibilities. 🙂

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  11. Pets are loyal no matter one’s mood.

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  12. And now you’re writing gems. Well done.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  13. The ending packed an unexpected emotional punch. Great story.

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  14. Very sad. Nice story.

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  15. Brilliant, they will take care of each other.

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