Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Sashay to Trouble

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The moon filtered through the starless clouded sky.

She could see tiny white lights shining on the patio. By midnight, they’d be drunk.
It was the perfect night to go.

Silk stockings stretched over her shapely legs and thighs. A black leather skirt accented her curvaceous hips. The spiky heels, she’d picked up at a yard sale, completed her outfit. She felt as fiery as a hot chili pepper.

A car pulled up beside her.

“Looking for some fun?”

“No …” “I’m near my destination.”

“Think so?”

“I’ve got other plans for you, cupcake.”

Tearfully, “I’m grounded. Right Mom?”

  2017©Isadora DeLaVega

Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 100 words
Photo prompt: Dale Rogerson

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

52 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Sashay to Trouble

  1. Oh I love how you made me do a double-take! Love that she showed her daughter the dangers…

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  2. Difficult to parent a teen, but mom did well. Nicely written Isadora!

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  3. /Querida Isadora

    ¡Me reí en voz alta! I wasn’t expecting the last line. Muy divertido. Bien escrito como siempre.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Ha, ha. Good for Mom. She’s no doubt been keeping an eye on her. Mom realizes the danger while her teen doesn’t as yet. Good writing, Isadora. 🙂 — Suzanne

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  5. just in time. saved by the bell. 🙂

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  6. Hahahaha! Grounded and license to fly ripped to shreds! Teens. Will they ever learn? Well, yes, but we have to wait until they are older.

    Funny story, Iz. Five out of five fake I.D.s.

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  7. A fine piece of writing, creative and amazing images.

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  8. I think in years to come she will thank her mother for saving her… there are predators out there…

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  9. Game over! You always make me feel for your characters 🙂

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    • A high praise from you, dear Gilly. Thank you. 😊 When I’m writing I try to feel what I would feel in the same situation.
      This is a fiction story but there is a bit of reality as I had 3 daughters and had to be vigilant at all times. 😎

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  10. A fine piece of writing, creative and full of images.

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  11. A tragic situation even though the mother has saved the day for now. Nicely written Isadora

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  12. Delightful. The third paragraph is gorgeous!
    (“Tearfully.” “I’m grounded.” “Right Mom?” this could be reworked to Tearfully, “I’m grounded. Right, Mom?” Otherwise, it’s a bit jumpy and ‘tearfully’ doesn’t need quotation marks. Hope this comment doesn’t offend.)

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  13. Cleverly done! This has such a sense of tragedy before you turned it round.

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  14. Clever piece of misdirection

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