Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Pierre’s Tulip Garden 

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She was waiting for Pierre in the garden. He’d gone to get some wine for their moonlight stargazing tonight. He was always very romantic.

The floral scents engulfed her as she walked among the many

prize-winning tulips.

There were many varieties. Pierre was proud of his green thumb. 

Turning, she saw him running towards her. 

“Mona! My precious flowerThe love of my life.”

Finally, he said it. 

“Oh, Pierre!

Mona, my flower!”

Oh, Pierre! I love you too!

Pierre reached her. He knelt and moved her foot aside.

“My flower!” “You were standing on my prize-winning flower.

2022©Isadora DeLaVega

Genre: Flash Fiction

Word Count: 100

Photo Prompt:©Na’ama Yehuda

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*****Do to alot of out of state visitors, I’ve edited an oldie but somewhat goodie from a FF 2017 story that goes well with this pix. Ejoy 😎 🌸 😍

Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of who I am no matter what venue I choose to express it in.

52 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Pierre’s Tulip Garden 

  1. “HUMOUR” no “HULOUR” …. although that’s pretty funny on its own.

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  2. Hahaha!!! Right on. Love your sense of hulour.

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  3. Well then, all I can say is that he needs to step up his act …
    Lovely use of the prompt! Thank you!

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  4. This was well written,… The twist caught me out

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  5. Ohhh dear. It’s best not to get between a gardener and his precious flowers…fun story!

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  6. Ohh dear…that would be a real mood breaker eh! I didn’t see that coming, take care when you tiptoe through the tulips….lol

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  7. Oopsie! 😦 I hope he forgave her and they had a wonderful life together.

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  8. obviously, a deal breaker for her or him or both. 🙂

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  9. Thanks for that laugh, it sends me right into weekend mood. I ddn’t see it coming. Have a good weekend.

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  10. Poor Mona. The humour was delightful.

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  11. Haha. Loved this. Great voices and such a funny ending.

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  12. Brilliant Isadora. That last line caught me completely by surprise!

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  13. Another obsessed gardener. Oh, well. Nicely framed. Clever take.

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  14. Querida Isadora,

    Perhaps she needs to step on another of his prizes. 😉 Poor Mona. Move on, Chica. El no vale la pena. Bien escrito.

    Shalom y abrazos,

    Rochelle

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  15. Great surprise for Mona; for me also. Poor Mona.

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  16. This made me laugh, Isadora. Good one 🙂

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  17. Killed the moment as well as the flower! Good one 🙂

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  18. That must have been a beautiful flower.

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  19. Oh yes, quite comical indeed, Isadora! 😆 His poor flower! 🙂

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  20. A comedy of errors, indeed

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