The funeral was exactly the way my grandmother had wanted.
And, why wouldn’t it be?
She pre-paid and planned for it all before she died.
Always the forward-thinking woman, no one was going to be able to leave any details out.
The rose garden was to be her final resting place.
She’d say, “Where else would I want to be?”
“These roses have helped me create beautiful paintings that will live on in the homes of so many, long after I’m gone”.
Her garden was magical. She could grow just about anything.
I’m sure she’s looking down at us all and saying,“Pick up a paint brush and make magic happen”.
2015©Isadora DeLaVega
Genre: Flash Fiction
Word Count: 113 words
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September 27, 2015 at 2:00 pm
What an inspiring piece of writing! Grandma seems like a liver and a go getter and I love that about the character. Rather than burden people after her death, she planned it before hand. She is one to be missed. A wonderful read 🙂
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September 27, 2015 at 6:44 pm
Thank you for seeing the character come to life in my story. I was inspired by my grandmother.
She was way before her times. She didn’t paint and wasn’t an artist but she was an incredible crafter.
Her creations were her well-received and requested. She taught me to be independent and that a woman
can do or be anything their heart desires.
Isadora 😎
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September 26, 2015 at 8:45 pm
Such a lovely story, in which. we learn so much about the grandmother. Her love for her family, her garden and her painting shines through.
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September 27, 2015 at 6:38 pm
I appreciate the way you were able to read the depth of the character in my words. I was inspired by
my grandmother who was way before her time. She was an inspiration to me. Thank you for leaving
your lovley comment and visiting.
Isadora 😎
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September 27, 2015 at 7:11 pm
You’re welcome, Isadora. I really enjoyed your story. 🙂
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September 25, 2015 at 6:31 pm
Such an interesting look at this grandmother, in so few words — I feel like I can picture her, always a plan for things, always getting things done, fussing around to make sure things are just the way she likes them — and why wouldn’t they be? I can even picture her in the garden, painting, talking to herself about whether the painting is exactly the way she wants it yet. Or maybe talking to the painting itself!
Very touching story.
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September 27, 2015 at 6:36 pm
I can see the you were able to feel the spirit of the grandmother coming through in my words.
I modeled the story after my grandmother. She was an inspiration for me. She did not paint but
was very crafty. Thank you for seeing the beauty of her character.
Isadora 😎
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September 27, 2015 at 6:40 pm
She sounds like a wonderful woman, and clearly very effective in her inspiration!
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September 25, 2015 at 2:14 pm
Nice, I like it 🙂
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September 25, 2015 at 2:26 pm
I apprecaite your visiting my blog and commenting. Thank you.
Isadora 😎
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September 26, 2015 at 6:31 pm
No worries, I enjoyed your story! 🙂
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September 23, 2015 at 6:43 pm
Great story. I was thinking the grandmother would then be looking up instead of looking down at them. But realized you are correct. My grandparents pre-paid for cremation. It made it so easy when the time came, but so strange, too, to have them now in a little box (OK, urn)! They died 14 years apart and now I have both of their “cremains” and will be scatterings their ashes within the following year.
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September 23, 2015 at 8:46 pm
I think she’s looking down from heaven. But, one has to believe in heaven. I’m on the fence. It fit the story though. 😊
It can be sad to have pre-arranged funerals. After the pain of loss, comes the appreciation for it.
If you lived in Florida you could go out on this special boats that take you to a place where they are scattered in the ocean. There are concrete urns that can be purchased for those who want to be in the ocean with the fish traveling in and out of the urn. Lots of elderly in Florida. You hear it all.
Sorry about your parents being gone. May they R.I.P.
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September 23, 2015 at 11:57 pm
My parents are still around, and healthy as far as I know. It was my grandparents I was talking about! 🙂
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September 24, 2015 at 3:42 pm
OOpppss …. sometimes, I rush to read and I lose track. My apologies. 😥
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September 24, 2015 at 7:23 pm
No, I do the same. Sometimes I get the person’d name wrong but I don’t think I’ve ever killed off someone’s parents. 😉
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September 25, 2015 at 3:26 am
lol
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September 23, 2015 at 5:21 pm
A lovely resting place, but I’d be scared my cats would dig me up and ask where their food was! A simply beautiful little story.
Check out my FFfAW story!
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September 23, 2015 at 9:32 pm
Ahhh … I love kitties. They could live with me and they wouldn’t be able to do that to you. LOL
I appreacite your coming by Rosey. Thank you. 😎
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September 23, 2015 at 9:38 pm
I just popped over to read your FFfAW. It posted the comment on Google.
I’m not sure why. Hope it’s @ Goggle. Great story.
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September 23, 2015 at 3:55 pm
Thank you for sharing the story, Izzy.
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September 23, 2015 at 9:31 pm
My pleasure, Amy. I’m pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Izzy 😎
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September 23, 2015 at 2:46 pm
Lovely story, great forward planning, we all need to do this but somehow we all think we have plenty of time.
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September 25, 2015 at 2:24 pm
It can be difficult to imagine planning for our demise. But, on the other hand, it could be of comfort for
those left behind. Emotions aren’t clear when a loved one passes. If the details are in place, they can mourn
in peace.
Thank you for viviting and leaving a comment. It’s greatly appreciated.
Isadora 😎
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September 23, 2015 at 1:45 am
I really like this, Izzy. There are lots of people who plan their funerals or at least the music and other aspects. I want my funeral, when it comes, to be a joyous celebration of my homecoming.
janet
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September 23, 2015 at 3:40 am
I think it’s a good idea; some might not agree. But, it makes it easier on the family. The first time I heard about this was
from my grandmother. She was a great lady.
I want my funeral to be like the ones in New Orleans. I think they have great funerals.
I’m happy you enjoyed this, Janet. Thank You.
Izzy 😎
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September 22, 2015 at 11:28 pm
This is a wonderful story. The grandmother certainly was a forward thinking woman, having her funeral all planned out. I can imagine that she is up in heaven saying, “Paint something beautiful.” Great story and thank you for participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge.
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September 23, 2015 at 3:43 am
Thank you for your comment, PJ, and for commenting. This story is fiction but my grandmother talked about her funerals
and her plans. It was part of my inspiration.
Isadora 😎
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September 23, 2015 at 4:02 am
I think it is very smart to have your funeral planned. It takes the burden off the children.
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September 22, 2015 at 9:35 pm
This is so lovely, Issy.
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September 22, 2015 at 11:24 pm
I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Sylvia. It’s fiction but a bit of my grandmother’s wishes in it.
Thank you,
Izzy 😎
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