Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Perfect Moments


Another day is about to pass. With wide eyes, I see into the remains of the day. The red ink, in the blue milk skies, illuminating the world before dusk. I love you as the night loves shadow. I love the essence of all you are. Each time I see your handcrafted goblets, a smile invades my lips.

When Iโ€™m alone like this, youโ€™re always in my heart. The sun massages my face from the suns rays streaming through the open window. The wind ruffles my hair. I can feel your exhaustion against yielding grain like my thoughts of you.
ยฉIsadora DeLaVega

Genre: Flash Fiction

Word Count: 100

Photo Prompt: Sarah Ann Hall

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of whom I am no matter what venue I choose to express it.

36 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Perfect Moments

  1. Lovely. She seems to have come to a nice place with her grief where she can feel happiness with her memories. acceptance of her loss but still that loving and wanting.

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  2. So lyrical, it transported me to another world.
    Beautifully written.

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  3. This was so beautiful Isadora. I could repeat what everyone said but… just longingly lovely.

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  4. So beautiful… that longing is so well said… more like a gentle ache than a piercing pain

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  5. What beautiful prose. It flows so effortlessly and creates crystal-clear images of love and longing.

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  6. Very touching Issy, one of your best one hundreds, happy Saturday lovely lady!

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  7. Nice 100. I love this… I love you as the night loves shadow.

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  8. This is beautiful. Peaceful in its longing. Well done, my dear.

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  9. Querida Amiga

    ยกEstoy feliz de verte aquรญ!Beautiful poem. I could feel the love and the grief of loss. Hermosa.

    Shalom y paz


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  10. Such a beautiful poem, my dear Isadora, full of love… ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—

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  11. This is an amazingly clear picture of one who is grieving the loss of a great love. Beautiful.

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  12. I liked “I can feel your exhaustion against yielding grain”

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