Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – Perfect Moments


Another day is about to pass. With wide eyes, I see into the remains of the day. The red ink, in the blue milk skies, illuminating the world before dusk. I love you as the night loves shadow. I love the essence of all you are. Each time I see your handcrafted goblets, a smile invades my lips.

When I’m alone like this, you’re always in my heart. The sun massages my face from the suns rays streaming through the open window. The wind ruffles my hair. I can feel your exhaustion against yielding grain like my thoughts of you.
Β©Isadora DeLaVega

Genre: Flash Fiction

Word Count: 100

Photo Prompt: Sarah Ann Hall

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of who I am no matter what venue I choose to express it in.

36 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Perfect Moments

  1. Lovely. She seems to have come to a nice place with her grief where she can feel happiness with her memories. acceptance of her loss but still that loving and wanting.

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  2. So lyrical, it transported me to another world.
    Beautifully written.

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  3. This was so beautiful Isadora. I could repeat what everyone said but… just longingly lovely.

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  4. So beautiful… that longing is so well said… more like a gentle ache than a piercing pain

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  5. What beautiful prose. It flows so effortlessly and creates crystal-clear images of love and longing.

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  6. Very touching Issy, one of your best one hundreds, happy Saturday lovely lady!

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  7. Nice 100. I love this… I love you as the night loves shadow.

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  8. This is beautiful. Peaceful in its longing. Well done, my dear.

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  9. Querida Amiga

    Β‘Estoy feliz de verte aquΓ­!Beautiful poem. I could feel the love and the grief of loss. Hermosa.

    Shalom y paz


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  10. Such a beautiful poem, my dear Isadora, full of love… πŸ˜˜πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ€—

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  11. This is an amazingly clear picture of one who is grieving the loss of a great love. Beautiful.

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  12. I liked “I can feel your exhaustion against yielding grain”

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