And when the way became rough for her,
they lifted her and gave her their strength,
just as she had given them hers.
One day, their mother led them to a hill. Beyond the mountain, they could see a shining road edged with trees and golden gates flung wide open.
And mother said, “I have reached the end of my journey.
Now, I know the end is better than the beginning. My children can walk with dignity and pride, and with their heads held high, so can their children after them.
And the children said, “You will always walk with us, Mother, even when you have gone through the gates.”
And they watched her as she went on alone, and the gates closed after her.
And they said: “We cannot see her, but she is with us still. A Mother like ours is more than a memory. She is a living presence.”
2022©Isadora Delavega
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August 1, 2022 at 10:15 pm
I know what it’s like to lose a mum Isadora, 3 years ago. The pain; grief and sense of loss! This is beautifully; thoughtfully and full of lovely imagery! 👌❤️😁👏
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August 3, 2022 at 8:24 pm
I’m pleased you were able to feel the emotions in my words. Sorry for the loss of your mother. We always remember them fondly. My mother passed away in 1992. I still feel the emotions everyday. Thanks for visiting Ken and commenting.
Isadora 😎
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August 3, 2022 at 8:29 pm
You’re very welcome Isadora, my pleasure. 😁 Yeh, the emotions and memories never go away, do they?! I’m also sorry for the passing of your mum. 🙁
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July 30, 2022 at 8:39 am
Beautiful, with a tinge of grief.
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July 31, 2022 at 8:19 pm
It’s a sorrowful moment when a mom passes.
Thank you, Jude, for visiting and commenting. Isadora 😎
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July 27, 2022 at 1:32 pm
She may have gone but her spirit remains. A touching tale Isadora.
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July 28, 2022 at 4:19 pm
I’m glad you saw that in my story.
Thanks, Keith. Happy Thursday to you!
Isadora 😎
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July 26, 2022 at 9:00 pm
Such a lovely post, full of moving words. Very deep.
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July 26, 2022 at 9:14 pm
Thank you, Benjamin, for the wonderful comment. I’m pleased you felt the depth of the emotions on both sides of the light.
Welcome and please come back again.
Isadora 😎
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July 27, 2022 at 3:11 am
you are welcome. I surely will come back again, Isadora.
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July 26, 2022 at 2:53 pm
Lovely story Isadora! A nice take on the prompt! 👍😁👌👏
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July 26, 2022 at 3:13 pm
Thank you for commenting and for stopping by, Ken. I appreciate it.
Isadora 😎
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July 26, 2022 at 3:27 pm
You’re welcome Isadora, my pleasure! 🙏😁
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July 26, 2022 at 9:16 pm
🙏🏻 😎
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July 26, 2022 at 1:45 pm
Oh it’s so beautiful and moving Isadora. Thank you so much for joining in.
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July 26, 2022 at 2:28 pm
I appreciate your lovely words, Sadje.
It’s always a pleasure to participate.
Isadora 😎
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July 26, 2022 at 3:21 pm
You’re most welcome
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