Inside the Mind of Isadora

Friday Fictioneers – I Loved Her First

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He’d known her since she was very young. She was beautiful. He loved her the second he laid eyes upon her. His love ran deep.

At one time, he had been her hero. She looked to him for advice and guidance. She said she loved him too. But now, he was losing her to another man. 

Thoughts of stepping away from her were impossible to imagine. The heartfelt pain might be too much to endure.

He kissed her forehead and cheek, a desperate hug with tear-filled eyes.

Looking into her eyes, he smiled and gave her to the groom.

2022©Isadora DeLaVega

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WARNING: tissues needed when viewing video

 

I Loved Her First – Heartland (Lyrics)

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Genre: Flash Fiction

Word Count: 100 words

Photo Prompt:©JohnNixon

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Author: Inside the Mind of Isadora

Intriguing, sensitive, mysterious, loving, artistic and crackling with excitement for life is a pretty good description of who I am. I just retired from the world of art where I sold my Artfully Designed Handmade Jewelry for 28 years; although, art will always be a part of who I am no matter what venue I choose to express it in.

40 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – I Loved Her First”

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  2. Anita
    June 28, 2022 at 3:33 pm

    Tough for fathers to part with their angels.

    Here’s my story-
    Are You There? – Anita

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  3. Margaret
    June 27, 2022 at 7:21 am

    Such a big moment in both of their lives. Beautifully told, with a surprise ending.

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  4. Laurie Bell
    June 26, 2022 at 8:36 am

    Awwwwww wow. A love of a father for a daughter never dies. Beautiful

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  5. msjadeli
    June 26, 2022 at 1:32 am

    Isadora, this is one of the best “twists” I ever read. You got me. Thank you for your heartfelt story. I’m sure many parents feel exactly this way when their child gets married.

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    • Inside the Mind of Isadora
      June 25, 2022 at 4:30 pm

      Hi Gilly ❤️
      It’s so good to see you here.
      Thank you for the comment.
      Have you been blogging? I haven’t gotten any notifications of your posts.
      I thought you decided not to blog anymore. I guess I should have popped over to check.
      I hope you’re well and have been able to circumvent this COVID guy.
      Be well … Stay safe …🤗
      Isadora 😎

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  7. rochellewisoff
    June 25, 2022 at 10:59 am

    Querida Isadora,

    Such a tender story. I love the gentle misdirect. You put a smile on my face and a tear in my eye. Sweet song. On that note, remember this one? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qavJ91jRPfU

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Inside the Mind of Isadora
      June 25, 2022 at 4:47 pm

      Querida Rochelle,
      The song was a walk down memory lane.
      I remember Mike Douglas singing it. It was touching then and now. There are some girls that have a way with their dads.
      I’m touched you found the story to be tender and that it brought a smile. Thank you for reading and the song url. Have a wonderful weekend 💜
      Abrazos y Carino,
      Isadora 😎

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  8. Sandra
    June 25, 2022 at 9:38 am

    A very moving twist, loved it.

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  9. Bill
    June 24, 2022 at 3:00 pm

    Great and sweet story, Isadora. And should the other man not work out, he will be there for her. 🙂

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  10. Iain Kelly
    June 24, 2022 at 2:20 pm

    Lovely story, a difficult time for a parent, with mixed feelings!

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  11. Keith's Ramblings
    June 24, 2022 at 11:15 am

    Having given two daughters away, I know exactly how he feels. A touching tale, Isadora.

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  13. notestowomen
    June 23, 2022 at 11:13 pm

    This was such a beautiful story, Isadora. It’s so hard for fathers to give their precious daughters away.

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  14. James McEwan
    June 23, 2022 at 7:59 pm

    Fantastic, I loved how this story held my attention and had a very satisfactory end.

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  15. 100 Country Trek
    June 23, 2022 at 4:50 pm

    Thanks for sharing your story. Take care.

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  16. neilmacdon
    June 23, 2022 at 4:41 pm

    I wasn’t sure whether thsi was a father or an unrequited lover until I read your comment.

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    • Inside the Mind of Isadora
      June 23, 2022 at 6:53 pm

      I was trying to convey the thoughts running through a father’s mind just before he gives his beloved daughter away. I’ll go back and create another story – not 100 words – and see how it can be clearer.
      Thanks for the informative comment.
      Isadora 😎

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  17. oneta hayes
    June 23, 2022 at 4:22 pm

    Aww, so touching. A delightful word portrait of a loving father.

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  18. Sadje
    June 23, 2022 at 4:16 pm

    So sweet and heartfelt story

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